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This Wasn't... pg 2 by eeveelover893 This Wasn't... pg 2 by eeveelover893
:bulletblue: Okai, this is page 2 of a short comic i did for Nagi and Yume oAo I do not have page 1 uploaded cuz Bleu-chan did not scan it for some reason...? -confuzed plz-

SOOOO~ i shall explain!

Story:
People at school are telling rumors about Yume because someone managed to find some information about her past.

A lot of people don't like Yume cause she's so reserved and doesn't speak to anyone but like three people (Nagi, Tanami, and Keyo). She gets really good grades and people think she looks down on them.

So they say stuff like: "She didn't even cry at her father's funeral" and "I heard she killed her own mother."

Which is partially true. She didn't cry for her father because she hated him and was so emotionally confused. Her mother died of poor health, but her health worsened after she had Yume.

The first page of this comic picks up after Nagi and Yume are walking home and he jokingly brings it up.

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THANK YOU FOR READING THAT :iconotlplz: i like how Yume yelling came out in this picture C:

Page 1: coming soon...?
Page 3: [link]
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Blooming-Pinguicula Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Student General Artist
How sad. T^T
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eeveelover893 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Student General Artist
I'M SORRY IT'S SO SAD I'M SORRYYYYYYY D':
i'm so mean to my charactersss ;____; -pats Yume and Nagi on the head-
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SkyPrince003 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2010  Student Digital Artist
top left panel is PERFECTLY executed. the middle panel, shorten the chin a little. It makes her look a little bit like a guy. hmmm, actually, i take that back. Instead of curving the mouth upwards, curve it downwards. According to the angle you're giving, the mouth would curve downwards. =) aside from that, good job! :3
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eeveelover893 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Student General Artist
thank you soooo much for the advice! ;A; :icongwomp: lol XD
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SkyPrince003 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Student Digital Artist
np. i really wanna see more improvement from you. like you, i still have so much to improve on as well
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eeveelover893 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Student General Artist
we shall both improve then yus! c:
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SkyPrince003 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Student Digital Artist
YEAH! :3
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eeveelover893 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Student General Artist
YUS~ C:<
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